by Eosphorus
Excellent!!! You've done well. I like this type of story. Much the same as my life.
I rarely give 5 stars, but this hits it out of the park. Sweet and romantic, with details that puts the reader in the room with these two. A green-eyed, strawberry blonde chubby girl who smells like green apples; my wet dream come to life. No misspelled words, and good grammar -- Well Done!
Not as erotic as I would have liked, but that's just because I love fucking. But this story is beautiful and that's why I gave it five stars. Keep up the great writing !
It was etouffee in my case. Taught a doe-eyed midwestern girl how to peel and devein shrimp, make a roux, turn off the heat so the shrimp don't get rubbery, and freeze the shells to make stock later.
I was young once, and in love. Those were good days. Five stars.
This should have been in Romance...maybe Erotic Couplings but not Fetish. BBW is a preference, a beautiful, sexy preference. PVC...now that's a Fetish...imho. I almost didn't read it because it was Fetish but the descriptor piqued my curiosity.
Anyway, before I get hung, drawn & quartered, for my erroneous definition, it got 5 stars from me. Thank you.