All Comments on 'The Sun and The Moon AMBW 05: Power'

I had read this story a couple years ago when it first came out. It's good to see an alternate to bwwm. The story line and characters are well written. I hope to see more from this story and you as a writer in general. Thank you again

Great writing! Thanks for continuing this. I love to see writers come back to stories even after a while and move the story forward.

Hiro is toast by the way! He is swimming around in the ol' river in Egypt trying to back track. I particularly like how he is so removed from the emotions he feels that are not anger. He's clearly smitten with Lucy but can't even sit with that. Maybe I am weird, but I don't feel for Lucy as much as I feel for Hiro. Again, great story looking forward to the next installment.

PLEASE CONTINUE! I love this series!