All Comments on 'The Sun and The Moon AMBW 07: Goddess'

Love this story!!!

Terrific job! Nicely done,

first thing i said when i saw this update "no FUCKING WAY!!!"

glad you're back and fantastic chapter! please your writing is amazing, shut out any negative voices, love!

I'm so so glad you continued sharing this story. I love your style of writing! I can't wait to see where the story goes!!! 😆

Fantastic chapter! Waited so long for this. Looking forward to reading more!

Ugh. Just when it got good! I need an update.

He's a psychopath.

Or a sociopath, at the very least. Very interesting. Perhaps eventually he will find that Lucy is comfort personified, and that she is worthy of his trust. Here is hoping that when it's all over, he won't be *too* cruel - his mind knows that she is different, but people with ASPD cannot truly overcome their nature. Still, he wants to keep her...

Thank you for this. This is a strangely beautiful story, even if Hiro is a master manipulator.

I really need an update to this. This was good as hell.

Pleaseee continue this story i love them and definitely love the AMBW representation

This story seems to jump around a lot and it seems to just skip parts. Why? What happened to the missed phone call,did he know she was watching them what?????? I guess I understand why it's taken so long for this to be finished. I'm all about the AMBW love those story lines but this story needs a better flow and needs to stay on point and not leave us hanging. Oh well.

This is my 5th time reading this and I'm SO IN LOVE please keep going!