All Comments on 'The Sun in Her Sky Ch. 01'

Not usually a fan of this category, but this story kept my attention throughout. Well done,

Great story well written, can we expect Elaine succumbing to Gwen’s domination, and get to read about the absolute submissive she becomes, I do hope so. Well done

A very good start. I love the pacing and the premise. I do however worry that this story has the very real possablity of growing very, very dark given the catgory. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

This is just fantastic. I love the pacing and the thinking that has gone in to the story. I hope you write much much more.

BSDM of an consensual kind, yes.

I'm very grateful for these comments, so thank you VERY much to everyone who took the time.

@ Anonymous re: How is this non-consent - it isn't non-consent, but Becca does demonstrate reluctance at the start, so I feel that qualifies the story for this NonConsent/Reluctance category. I don't feel the story is philosophically aligned to consensual BDSM, since one side is using manipulation and deceit. But I really appreciate your comment!

I read through this eagerly, and as a Dom you've given me some exciting news ideas to try out.

Great, great work.

What a delicious and powerful story.. erotically and emotionally.. extremely well done.. hopefully that child will come to her senses and return to Gwen, where she belongs... of course the training to get there will have to be intense..

Thank you for such a wholistic approach to this genre

By far the best story I’ve come across on the website, the entire trilogy is just amazing!

Love love love! 💜 The writing is superb!