All Comments on 'The Supermarket'

I love this story and the attention to fine detail. I was captivated the whole way through, and it reminded me of my lover and I--only, that would be something that we could never do...causing quite an interesting twist and reaction for the story.

Thank you for sharing this with us!

I really need to start reading more of your stories. The attention to detail with the description was wonderful. You really have a way with words and you described the sex in terms of the emotional connection between the two lovers instead of just cock in pussy sex.

Also I loved the hint of mystery as to who pulled the fire alarm.

Fantastic! When will you take me shopping? x