All Comments on 'The Surprise'

but your story was okay, I guess. The lowercase "zach" and the uppercase "She" and "Her" annoyed me, but if that's the conventional way to do it in BDSM, fine.

When will I get the next chapter,you left me hangin,that poor,poor little man boy,he seemed so happy then boom,the last sentence and I have to wait for the next installment.

My forehead was in a fevered sweat worrying about the poor fellow.

I hope you continue it.