All Comments on 'The Surprise'

Too rushed and way too unrealistic...........and next time try a proofreader.

The sex was hot but I felt that it was too short and ended just as it getting hot. Three stars.

Dear me, get an editor.

More continue

Please continue this story.

Way too rushed.

The other comments cover the pros and cons of your story. They do not, however, embrace the enthusiasm displayed by Mom and Son. Really well developed energy between this couple, and I hope to read of their coupling for quite a few more episodes,

By the way, the length of the story further exemplifies the desires they share not only for one another, but also for their mutual enjoyment of being with each other.

Gave you a four ( 4 ) 'cause it rhymes with more.

Beginner writing skills. Nothing special about it….just a fuck! Sounds like a teenagers wet dream!

Hope part 2 is soon.

Awesome story loved how mother and son were both wanting the same thing, but it was a bit short hoping for more of this story! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Too rushed. Needs more and better descriptions of emotion and affection from both mother and son. A little build up to the mother asking her son if he wants to "fuck mommy" would have made a big difference for me.

Lovely story of mother and son love but not long enough

Keep going. You've captured the thrill of this beautifully.

Very nice story but it needs more please. Gave it 5 stars

Loved this short story but not much information and the sex was quick you need to continue 5 stars