All Comments on 'The Surprise'

by bawdybloke

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Rimbaud17Rimbaud177 months ago

Wow. I almost didn't finish it, but the twist at the end redeemed the narrator. I don't usually read nonconsent stories, but I've liked other things you've written, and so I kept on reading, even after I thought I didn't like the main character. I'm glad I did.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A heart-warming story in nonconsent. Nice.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Too consensual for noncon.

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