All Comments on 'The Surprise Party'

by dobieholloway

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remy247remy247over 1 year ago

Wow. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OH, MY FUCKING GOD!!! After the urge to kill Harry finally died down, I'd be thinking long and hard for ways to pay him back. I had no idea that this great ***** story was headed to such a surprise ending. You seem to have a wicked fun-loving imagination, so hopefully this is just your first of many more stories here. MLF

sensuousOkietopsensuousOkietopover 1 year ago

Good story with a novel premise and a lot of humor, Sex, too!

ddow1971ddow1971over 1 year ago

Short, sexy and awesome.

DogDadDogDad7 months ago

Great and unexpecting!

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Former inexperienced farm boy who moved to the big city and picked up a LOT of experience, then many years later settled down to write about his adventures.