The Surprise Visit

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Part 1 of the 6 part series

Updated 06/11/2023
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carnee
carnee
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The Surprise Visit

Preface

This is the fourth part of the continuing saga of Brooke and Brad. After their stay at Pine Lake and their honeymoon in Hawaii they embark on a new life with their new friends. On their first assignment things go a little awry, but ultimately work out. Now they are back on Maui and enjoying the time off from their new jobs. I recommend reading the first three sagas. Couples Camp, Honeymoon in Hawaii and The Island of Anguilla.

A word of warning, most of my stories contain elements of cuckolding, chastity, BDSM, and sharing. Some contain elements of consensual non consent and extreme situations that some might find disturbing. Everything I describe is pure fantasy. I hope you enjoy.

Chapter 1

The sunlight bounced off the water as the palm trees gently swayed back and forth. The Island was slowly waking up just like Brooke. She could hear the shower and knew it was Brad getting ready for his morning workout. She heard the squeak of the faucet and knew he was done as she wiped the sleep from her eyes. It was too late to join him in the shower, but not too late to catch a quick peak before he left for the morning.

"Hey there sexy," she said with a smile.

"Look who's talking." Brad shot back, as he took in her beautiful body, fresh from a good night's sleep.

Brad continued to dry off as Brooke did what she needed to do and jumped into the still steamy stall.

Brooke called out over the water raining down on her soft body as Brad continued to get ready for the day.

"Hey, Mia said Michelle and Ron are flying in today and want to take us all out to dinner tonight."

Brad had mixed feelings about that revelation. On the one hand, it had been a while since Ron and Michelle had been around. He liked them both and God knows they are responsible for the wonderful life he and his beautifully wife are now living, but the fact is, they both work for Michelle now. Brad knew this meant another assignment was coming, but the more he thought about it the more he realized it was probably about time anyway.

"Oh really? "Brad responded.

"I guess that means our time off is about over." Brad added.

Brad finished brushing his hair and his teeth as Brooke finished up in the shower. He was pulling up his running shorts when she emerged from the shower and gently toweled off.

"Any idea what time Michelle and Ron are supposed to be in?" He questioned.

"No, just that we are supposed to be planning on a nice dinner out tonight with them."

"Ok, I need to get going, but I'll see you later baby." Brad said as he gave his wife a peck on the lips.

"Ok babe, have a good run." Brooke responded as she continued getting ready for her day.

Brad caught one last glimpse of her luscious body as he looked back at her sliding her slender leg into the lacy black panties she had picked out for the day. An image he would gladly carry with him out to the beach for his morning run.

The last few months had been quite a challenge. Max and Logan took turns training Brad in ways he had never imagined. It was as if he had signed up for bootcamp. The idea of being in the military had never crossed his mind. Ever since he was a kid, he had more of a mind for numbers than a body for combat. Sure, he had played some sports, but never anything as aggressive as football, and certainly nothing that involved fighting. But now here he was learning not only how to fight with his hands but also how to use other weapons as well. Logan was an expert in hand-to-hand combat and when he wasn't teaching Brad how to fight, he was teaching him how to evade capture. Max on the other hand was much more proficient with weapons.

Usually after his morning run, he spent time with Logan learning the tricks of the trade so to speak. Then later in the afternoon he would go out to the range and practice with Max. Brad took to his training outstandingly well and in no time was grouping shots better than even Logan could, after years of experience. Physically Brad was bulking up. He was in the best shape of his life. There were a few bruises here and there from training but the dark tan he had gotten made it hard to see them.

Brad was surprised to see both Max and Logan waiting for him as he exited the back of the estate, heading out for his daily run.

"Morning, my friend." Logan greeted.

"Mind if we join you today?" Max added.

"Why not?" Brad responded. "Just try to keep up." He joked as he took off running.

The three men raced down the beach, changing places as they fought for first. Brad might have been in the best shape of his life, but he certainly wasn't in better shape than his two associates. It took everything he had to get out in front of them. He would start to lose steam and they would pass him and then he would fight to regain his lead. Back and forth they went, all the way to the end of the beach, where the rocks blocked any further progress.

The three of them took their time working their way back to the house. The race to the end of the beach had taken them farther than any of them normally went and the competitiveness of if had worn off almost as quickly as the crisp morning air. Even though it was wintertime, it was still Hawaii, and a cool winter day in paradise could still get up into the 80's.

Max swung the gate open. He was the first of the three to step off the warm sand and onto the lush green grass of his back yard oasis.

"Guess I win boys." He laughed, indicating he was the first one back and therefor the winner of their race.

They all three laughed and argued, each trying to reason why he should be the one considered the winner. It was all in good fun and none of them was really trying to overshadow the other. It was just the way guys joked with one another.

"Hey, you guys you want some lunch?"

It was Mia. She was standing in the kitchen with Brooke. The two of them obviously getting ready to make some sandwiches and offering to make some for the boys as well.

Mia and Brooke had spent a lot of time together the last few months. They had buried any animosity they had for one another and had gained a good understanding of each other. Brooke understood more of how Mia got mixed up with the sex business in Anguilla and Mia understood the relationship Brooke had with Brad. On more than one occasion they spent late nights together by the pool talking like girls do and bonding over secrets.

The five housemates gathered around the large kitchen island, drinking water and gobbling down the kindly prepared lunch. The joking about who was the faster runner and who was the one with the most endurance continued until the jubilance was interrupted by the chime of the doorbell.

Max went to see what it was and returned a few seconds later.

"Surprise!" Michelle yelled, as she entered the room with Max.

"Oh Michelle, it's so good to see you." Brooke cried as she ran up to give her a hug.

Mia was a little bit shyer with Michelle but quickly responded to Michelle's outstretched arms and responded with a hug of her own.

"I have a surprise for you." Michelle announced not clear who she was talking to.

Michelle turned back towards the entrance to the kitchen and there stood two familiar but unexpected faces.

Max turned to see who it was as well and was just as surprised as the rest of the group. Mia was the only one who stood there completely unaware of who it was. The rest of the group moved in for hugs and handshakes.

Everyone was equally happy to see their favorite couple. The greatest party throwing, fun, sexy, resort owning couple ever.

"Oh my god, it's Nick and Kim!" Brooke screamed.

Max and Logan were certainly happy to see their lakeside friends, but Brooke was by far the most excited. Brooke was like a little girl that just got her first pony. Brad thought he saw a tear escape the corner of Brooke's eye as she almost broke down with joy, throwing her arms around Nick and giving him a giant hug.

A few firm handshakes and some respectful hugs later and the surprise couple was being introduced to Mia. It wasn't long before Ron appeared as well, professing he had taken all the bags to their rooms.

The rest of the afternoon was spent around the pool chatting and reminiscing about things that had happened over the last year or so. It was the off season, and it was time for Nick and Kim to take their much-needed vacation time. The resort was closed until spring and Max had invited them to stay, as long as they wanted. Michelle told them what a great job Brooke and Brad did in Anguilla even though the mission went a little sideways.

The whole afternoon was spent between the warm pool and the cool blender. They drank pitchers of frozen Mai Tia's until the rum ran out.

The bright yellow sun was quickly fading, and the warm orange glow of sunset was casting its shadow on the pool. The temperature was quickly dropping from the highs of the day and the guests were all starting to show signs of exhaustion. Everyone was having a great time, but the day was coming to an end.

"What do you say we all get cleaned up and go get some dinner?" Nick suggested.

Everyone agreed and proceeded to head off to their respective rooms to get ready for dinner.

"Can I talk to you for just a second Brad?" Mia asked, stopping him from leaving the back yard with everyone else.

Mia waited till everyone had left before she proceeded.

"I couldn't help but notice how Brooke acts around Nick, and quite honestly how you act as well."

Brad was a little confused. What was her question?

"She obviously has feelings for him." Mia continued.

"Yeah, It's pretty obvious." Brad confessed.

"And you're ok with that?" Mia probed.

"Yeah, I'm fine with her having her fun. We've talked about it, and she enjoys being the center of attention as much as I like watching her get the attention,"

"I understand that I've seen both of you and been with both of you before, but I can tell it's different with Nick." Mia gently pressed on.

"He looks at her differently, and she looks at him in a way I have never seen her look at other men. I hope you realize what you're doing."

"I just want to make sure you understand. I have seen this before. She could fall in love with him, if she hasn't already, and I hate to see either of you lose something you love so much."

Mia was trying to be a good friend to both. She was honestly trying to make sure Brad and Brooke stayed happy and didn't end up getting burned by playing too close to the fire.

"I appreciate your concern, and I'll take it to heart." Brad thanked her, before reaching out and helping her up from her lounge chair.

"I need to hurry up and take a shower, I'll see you downstairs in a few." Brad professed as he took off upstairs to get ready for dinner.

By the time he got up to the room, Brooke was already out of the shower and standing in front of the mirror with a sexy little sleeveless dress on. He jumped in the shower while she fixed her hair and makeup and finished getting herself presentable for the night.

A few minutes later and everyone was convening out front next to the limos. There was nine of them, so they split up Michelle and Ron went with Nick and Kim and the rest of the party in the second car. They had a great dinner at a seaside restaurant only a few minutes' drive from the house. Good food and polite conversation continued all the way through dessert.

One thing Brad did notice right away was the way Nick positioned himself next to Brooke as soon as they sat down at the table. Nick politely pulled the chair our for Kim and then quickly called Brooke to sit in the chair on the other side of him. Nick was at the head of the table with his wife sitting to his left and Brooke siting to his right.

Nick was quick to take control of the conversation. He would ask engaging questions of Brooke and look her directly in the eyes as she responded. It didn't seem to matter what the conversation was, Nick found a way to steer it back to Brooke. He was respectful and polite the whole night but the pull he had on her continued to become apparent.

Dinner was over and the lingering conversation was coming to an end.

"What do you say we go get some drinks and dance?" Nick announces, more like a command than a request.

"Oh, honey I'm too tired to go out after traveling, but you go have a good time." Kim interjected as she put her hand on his shoulder.

Things seemed to take a turn at that point and the evening started to go in a different direction.

I was so surprised when I saw Nick standing in the doorway of Max's kitchen. There was a feeling that overtook me, a feeling that I haven't felt since that first night at Pine Lake. Nick has a way about him. I can't help how I feel around him. He awakens feelings in me like no other man. I feel as if he can see into my soul. I can't hide anything from him. His eyes seem to cut through any resistance I might have, although I rarely find myself wanting to resist anything he desires. So, when he said he wanted to go find somewhere to dance and have a few drinks I was immediately ready to go.

What caught me off guard was the feeling of jealousy when Kim put her hand on what I could only see as MY man's shoulder. I knew it was her husband, and I knew my husband was sitting right there next to me, but I couldn't help but feel possessive of Nick. I would do anything for him, and I didn't want to share him anymore than he wanted to share me. I flashed back to our first dinner at the lake where he demanded Ten (Brad) to address me as ma'am and treated me as his prized possession.

"Oh, I would love to." I cheerfully agreed.

A few minutes later and the table was empty. The cars were filling this time divided between those who wanted to continue the night and those who wanted to return home.

I found myself sitting next to Nick with my husband Brad and Mia across from us.

"I am so glad you two came with us," Nick cheerfully announced.

"I've been thinking about this night for weeks. I am so happy to be here with you tonight." Nick softly said turning his attention directly to Me.

I felt my heart skip a beat. My face was warm, and my skin grew hypersensitive. I could feel the sexual tension in the air with every breath. I could see Brad out of the corner of my eye, but I couldn't muster up the strength to turn my head in his direction. I loved him but I was so tied to this sexy man I could barely control myself.

"I know it's your wife Brad but what do you say you let me have the first dance with her?" Nick bellowed.

I could hear Brad speaking and it seemed as if he was protesting the idea, but I could barely hear his words over the loud pounding of my racing heart.

"I tell you what, I'll make you a deal. The first one to guess what color panties she's wearing gets the first dance."

I heard Brad confidently agree to the deal but knew he wouldn't get it right. I already knew he was going to lose before he even took a guess.

"I think since it's my wife it's only fair I go first." Brad exclaimed.

"Go right ahead, give us your guess Brad."

"I knew exactly what pair she is wearing." Brad victoriously announced. "They are a lacey black pair I bought her just a week ago in Lahaina. "

I held my breath as I heard him say that. He was right, that was the pair I had put on earlier that morning when we were getting ready. But what he didn't know was after I took a shower, I left them off. I was overtaken by Nick's arrival and knew how much he preferred for me to go without. I couldn't help but let myself be free around him.

"Oh, I'm willing to bet your wrong. I am willing to bet she isn't wearing any at all under that sexy little dress of hers."

I could feel Nick's hand as he gently slid it up my thigh. I wanted nothing more than to feel his touch against my bare skin, but he stopped when he got to my dress and slowly lifted the fabric to reveal his prediction was accurate.

"I knew my sexy little girl would remember." Nick exclaimed.

Once again, I could sense my husband's presence and I could hear little whispers from my friend Mia, but I couldn't get myself to focus on them. Instead, I was solely focused on the sexy man who had his strong hand gently resting on the soft inner portion of my thigh. I wanted to look over to make sure Brad was ok, but I couldn't summon the strength. Every molecule in my body wanted Nick to move his hand closer to my treasure. I wanted nothing more than to show him how moist I was getting at the thought of him.

It seemed like torture before the limo came to a stop and we were getting out at the club. I was already a mess of emotions. I wanted to go dancing and feel the firm embrace of my Sir but at the same time I was dying to get to a private space with him.

The loud music and flashing lights broke the spell he held over me. Although I felt his tight grip around my waist, I was alert enough now to see Brad sitting in a booth with Mia sipping on a drink and watching me with Nick. I tried to make eye contact with him to make sure he was still ok with me being with Nick. We had talked about the events of the last few months and even though he professed how much it turned him on to watch me enjoy myself I was still concerned about his feelings. I didn't want to lose the love or respect of the best man I had ever met, my husband and hopefully one day the father of my children.

"I missed you little girl." Nick whispered in my ear.

"I missed you to Sir." I gasped as he pulled me in closer.

I was mush in his arms. Anything he wanted of me; I would do. If he told me to jump off a bridge I would do it for him, although I knew he would never ask me to do anything that would hurt me.

"Can you feel what you are doing to me?" He growled.

I was speechless as I felt the hard staff in his pants rubbing up against my leg. I knew what he was packing, and I couldn't get the memory of it out of my mind. He had the most amazing cock I had ever seen. It wasn't the largest I have had, but it was by far the best. He was perfectly proportioned, and I fit around him like a leather glove around a strong hand. It was even more true now than it was a few months ago when I fell in love with his cock. Back then I had less experience with other cocks but now I knew for sure. His was ten times better than anything else I had experienced. Even Brad's cock. The man I truly loved. Even his cock couldn't touch me like Nick's

"Let's go sit down and get a drink." Nick said, firmly in control.

We sat down, side by side across from Brad and Mia. It was like we were on a double date only I was with Nick and Mia was with Brad. I felt a slight moment of jealousy at the thought of Mia with Brad but that was quickly forgotten when I felt Nick guiding my hand onto the bulge in his pants.

I could hear Nick talking to Brad and Mia, the three of them talking as if nothing was out of the ordinary. The whole time I couldn't focus on anything but the silky fabric blocking my access to the rock-hard treat beneath my hand. I was on fire with desire. I wanted to grasp his cock in my hand. It was like the safety of the shore just out of reach, and I felt like I would drown if I didn't get to the sandy beach soon.

I was solely focused on Nick. The sound of his voice the feel of his masculinity and the aroma coming off him filled my senses. I was startled when I realized Brad was staring at me. His eyes were locked on me as he knew what I was doing under the table. He could tell I was rubbing the prize I so longed for. He looked like a lava lamp sitting across from me. His emotions mixing and swirling like the oily novelty. A mix of arousal and jealousy filled his body, bubbling around in a beautiful mix of sexual desire and possessiveness. I wasn't sure who was having a better time, me or him. I shot him a knowing smile and he returned it with one of his own.

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