All Comments on 'The Sweet Smell of Sex'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good, but...

You really need an editor to help you improve sentence structure, flow and dialog.

alexcarralexcarrover 9 years agoAuthor
My Story

Been there done that?

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