All Comments on 'The Sweetest Taste'

by Grayson_James

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lonewolf69lonewolf69almost 16 years ago
Great story so far!

Very enjoyable,hope there's going to be more to this?Can't wait for the next chapter,keep up the great work!

lonewolf69lonewolf69almost 16 years ago
Great story so far!

Very enjoyable,hope there's going to be more to this?Can't wait for the next chapter,keep up the great work!Let me know if you plan on doing another chapter ok? chainedwolf69@hotmail.com.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great start

Absolutely a great start! Loved the pace of the story, not too fast, not too slow. Keep it up.

IrinIrinalmost 16 years ago
Sweet

Sweet story, I'd love to see what happened next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Excellent start

Thoroughly well written with feelings eminating from both past and present events. For me it was as if I was experiencing the events myself (if only!!). A nice sensual build-up to (I hope) ensuing chapters the inevitable act - keep-up the good work and don't be tempted to rush the next instalments. Loved it so please continue!! UMM - just in case you are wondering I am female!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
omg

your an awesome writer! i love the details you give! please finish this story!!

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