by Grayson_James
your an awesome writer! i love the details you give! please finish this story!!
Thoroughly well written with feelings eminating from both past and present events. For me it was as if I was experiencing the events myself (if only!!). A nice sensual build-up to (I hope) ensuing chapters the inevitable act - keep-up the good work and don't be tempted to rush the next instalments. Loved it so please continue!! UMM - just in case you are wondering I am female!
Absolutely a great start! Loved the pace of the story, not too fast, not too slow. Keep it up.
Very enjoyable,hope there's going to be more to this?Can't wait for the next chapter,keep up the great work!Let me know if you plan on doing another chapter ok? chainedwolf69@hotmail.com.
Very enjoyable,hope there's going to be more to this?Can't wait for the next chapter,keep up the great work!