All Comments on 'The Swimmer Ch. 03'

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ncstxncstxover 4 years ago
Great story.

Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
very hot

very very hot and well written. 5 stars. can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Need sex with Dad and Uncle

Sorry you stopped before sex with Dad. I thought after the first time then include the Uncle. Next chapter includes sex with Dad and Uncle plus brothers could pick up some married men like the guy at the gym. This time have sex with married men. When I went to college men hit on men and the best sex was married men.

teachyou84teachyou84over 4 years ago
Fantastic

Wow...what a great story, absolutely loved it. I think I wore my cock out! Would love to be in this scenario!

WeitzeWeitze5 months ago

Proof Read. You are getting sloppy. Get someone else to proof read for you. Will make the the story smoother to read without the sudden bumps of wrong word, etc. Really like the story line. Keep going.

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