All Comments on 'The Swimmer Ch. 04'

by RCscrudato

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RCscrudato over 4 years agoAuthor

This is the end

It's the old show business saying, leave them wanting more. My theme as gay sex with a best friend and brother and dad. If Sam starts hooking up with guys at the Gym or Mom gets involved, it gets away from my core. I assume readers like a focused story and try ti keep it that way. This one, voyeurism, best friend, brother, dad.

teachyou84 over 4 years ago

Uncle

Would love to see the uncle get involved!

goducks111 over 4 years ago

5 stars

very hot!!! but of course, i wish you'd write more!

Weitze 5 months ago

Proof Read. You are getting sloppy. Get someone else to proof read for you. Will make the the story smoother to read without the sudden bumps of wrong word, etc. Really like the story line. Keep going.

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If I wanted to put information down I would not have chosen that ridiculous name. BUT I also submit stories to storiesonline.net which has a more realistic policy about age. I also post on storiesonline.net (a more enlightened site) under the name, familylove1954.

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