All Comments on 'The Switch'

by prettygirlaspen

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LeezyLeezyover 10 years ago
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You need to proofread a little more before you submit. Good imagery though, making her submit. Maybe you should make her count the spurts of cum after the in and out strokes.

prettygirlaspenprettygirlaspenover 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your comments! Editing is an opportunity for me. I'm going to work on it.

Thanks!

PG💋

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