All Comments on 'The Switch'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Sexy and fun!!!

Thanks for this naughty story! LOVED it!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
It Would Help

If you had given us some hint that she would be willing to try another man. Otherwise, although it is a sexy story from his POV, it is divorce from hers if and when she finds out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
I don't think it worked, at least in this category

The switch in perspective (she went from "you" to "her") was jarring and I'm with the other commenter that this is rather rape-ish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I liked what they did and the description. Definitely rape though but with a really friendly vibe to it? But I still really loved the story and appreciate that they weren't speaking disrespectfully of her. Seems weird to say that about a rape story.

Like minus her not previously agreeing to this it was great. Indeed an erotic coupling.

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