All Comments on 'The Switch Ch. 01'

So far so good, though the chapter end seemed rather abrupt.

Your stories are nice, and I especially like the heart warming phrases they use to each other. It s nice that they both want to please each other, and that they agreed to play the game of swapping roles.

If you think of improving the story, think of stretching out the time before they start school, getting to know each other, with a gradual take over of the teacher by the student. It might have been better if the teacher doesn't realise she is a student, until it is too late, they have started a relationship. That threat is something to push her into being more submissive, getting the teacher to do as she is told. Maybe use something else other than a blow job to finally make her subservient to the girl. That would keep the lesbian readers happier!

Please improve the grammar (keep it in the past tense, and check the spelling).

Great story!