All Comments on 'The Tale of the Families Ch. 01'

Wow!

FANTASTIC... Hurry with the next chapter..

Paul

You were right for listening to and implimenting some of your reader's suggestions. The longer development was much more titilating than boring. It also made the games the women played with each other more exciting, the climaxes more real, and enhanced the anticipation of more sex to come.

Very nice buildup to the action. Keep Writing