by thewhitestripe
This series is getting better by the page.
Thank you, can't wait for part 6
I just love it when I get a good laugh out loud chuckle like when Natalie interupted them and Andria calmly get put back together pecked him on the cheek like the little woman dropping off something for the hubby. Great stuff.
I started to have a problem at the top of the 2nd page; I liked the idea of her telling him what to do, but not what NOT to do.
Maybe more things like that added into their interactions.