All Comments on 'The Tales of the Silver Wind'

Thank you for counting.

If anything he's mad at himself and not at her.

Well that was mighty fine writing and a very enjoyable read. I am left wanting more and NEED to know what going to happen next. I didn't think I would like this as much as I did and it was a very pleasant surprise.

Sad it took so long for this chapter, hope the next one comes sooner!

Please don't stop with this story.j

For me it started off slow and after the 3rd page it just took off. thank you for a great read. love the characters, the plot and most of all your style of writing.... thank you.

I love your writing style. You seriously need an editor to help with using the correct words and the sentence structure. Someone who knows the difference between peak and peek. Someone to keep from changing the tense in the middle of a sentence. Someone who can add the proper punctuation as required. It is the difference between - Let's eat, Grandpa and Let's eat Grandpa. It will really help the readability of the story.

Still waiting for the next chapter.