All Comments on 'The Talk'

by JuanSeiszFitzHall

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ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 4 years ago
Why bother getting married

They are two very pathetic characters who souls not have kids whose little lives will be awful.

BadConscienceBadConscienceover 4 years ago
Different Perspective

I like the different twist you put on the over done 'hung like a horse' trope. Where his endowment is something in conflict with the relationship he wants. My only complaint is that it was too short. It just feels like they found a solution to their problem too quickly without much build up.

Over all it was a good read though

jazzharpjazzharp10 months ago

Surprised by the low score and only two comments. This is a good story. I'm only now reading your stories.

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'Juan Seisz FitzHall' is (big surprise) a pseudonym, under which I have published three erotic novels at smashwords.com: 'Mega Platinum VIP,' 'The Dance Game,' and 'Erotopia,' which together make up the trilogy 'The Erotichronicles.' That trilogy is finished. If the characters...