All Comments on 'The Taming of Eli'

Bravo, very good and highly erotic in terms of "visual" description. The concept is very well written and I found it to be very arousing for the tempo of the subject. Please write a sequel where possibly the mother LETS the son dominate her and use some more graphic details to get across the intense sexual nature of their new relationship. The only downfall was some of the lack of general description of how exactly they were positioned during the sex - at times I was wondering the nature of where the son was positioned as in relation to the mother.

Loved the story line. However, author needs to pay closer attention to grammar, spelling, sentence structure and formatting. Too many mistakes such as this can detract from the story itself. The idea is not to distract the reader by causing them to attempt to figure out what you mean, but to pull them into your story. I almost got off, but I was too distracted by the mistakes.

This could have been a masterpiece, but you did not continue so start writing and finish.

She might have him where she wants him for now, but the worm will turn once he gets a little older, and then she will probably will feel the revenge he will give her. Please continue the story....Rich

YOU CAN PUSH ONLY SO FAR, THEN WHEN HE GETS THE IDEA OF THE TRICK ,YOUR IN TROUBLE. REVENGE IS A NASTY THING, AND HE WILL MAKE HER PAY.THROUGH THE ASS,AND MORE. NOT A BAD STORY BUT IN CHAPTER TWO THE SONS REVENGE. PLEASE GIVE US A HOT FINISH......LAROC OF AGES

That was a good starter I hope there is a chapter 2