All Comments on 'The Tangle'

why can't you keeptwo women pregnant keeps it in the family!

I like it it was warm and cozy will there be more it would nice

Could have been much better if the sex scenes had more depth to them, rather then just mentioning that they actually happenned.

love the story, wish it went on longer. all your stories are brilliant - keep up the great work.

why would the guy stay with a fruit cake sister like that as soon as she started to bitch he would have left. if she had been trying to seduce him for years why would he want to live near her he would have found a place of his own and avoided her at all costs. keep it atleast somewhat believable please.

If the sex wasn't such an afterthought in your stories they'd be really great stories instead of just okay ones. Considering the taboo subject, it's really strange for the actual sensuality of physical copulation to be brushed aside as if in shame by a writer. Would you film a spaghetti western without horses and guns?

Such a loss.

what a hard time she had losing her husband and lover but it all came right when her son took her for his own and so glad the sister caught them in the act else they might never had become lovers as it is he has the best of all worlds - two women to fuck and babies too...what a wonderful life he has - vice is nice but incest is best - the very best kind of love....