All Comments on 'The Tattooed Woman Pt. 05'

Loving this series thus far! Reads like a good DnD campaign. Really looking forward to the next installment.

I dark eleven dark because of their nature or because they have dark skin; couldn’t quite work it out from earlier episodes. Loving the story

Are dark eleven dark because of their nature or because they have dark skin; couldn’t quite work it out from earlier episodes. Loving the story

EXCELLENT STORY I LIKE IT ! Waiting for more .

Thanks for the read 4*'stars on all 5 chapters .

txcraker

Anon, your question may be at least in part answered in the next episode, in part anyway.

I'm glad you're enjoying the tale, getting positive feedback gives me, and I think most would-be writers a hell of a buzz, so thanks.

Spirit02: Im a long-time player and DM of DnD, Pathfinder, Call of Cthulhu, Runequest, Star Wars, you name it. Met my wife at a university DnD society about 40 years ago (yes, I am that old). Good to hear from a fellow player.

God, Ash and Nyx are so hilarious:

"Remember, any of you bastards gets killed without my permission and I'll shove my boot up your arse. Let's go."

Nyx grinned, "Just your boot? Cos you never know, sounds like that might be fun."

"Fuck off Nyx."

"Beg pardon?"

"Sorry, I meant fuck off Sergeant."

ROTFL! So fucking adorable these two! This story is getting better and better. Now they haven't just their slaves and the weird woman, but also two nuns and a bunch of small kids. Do these slavers have the fitting jobs at all? Looks more like sisters of mercy.

Keep it coming! :-)

I was always led to believe that by originating in the underground . Below the surface . Without the Sun . This was why the were dark . Also the reason for their night vision . I guess I'll find out your take in the next chapter.

But I gotta say . This is excellent work . A wide range of intelligent warrior women . Is all I need .

The invented tongue was a nice flourish

I feel like your writing is smoothing out as this story goes on. Some of the genre flavor earlier on felt forced and a bit awkward- perhaps a little overdone- but you're getting the feel for your characters now. The story is intriguing so far. Nice work.

Intoxicatingly good, keeps getting better. Thank you for sharing.

It still feels like a wandering charity circus that gives everyone on its path a better future. But at least it has some very interesting personalities in it.