All Comments on 'The Temp'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Welcome Back

Hope you have many more stories.

juicylipsjuicylipsalmost 20 years ago
Yummy

Very hot. Loved it.

tnadnudertnadnuderalmost 9 years ago
Was All Set, But...

You had me interested right up until she put her head in his neck (I think it was)... The way you described positions of furniture & people up until then makes the rest of that physically impossible!

I think I'm a decent writer, but not of this type, which is a main reason I don't submit to this site. That written, it amazes me how many submit multi-part stories (or a ton of singular tales) that prove them to write believable fiction of any kind!

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