by Pokerman
You had me interested right up until she put her head in his neck (I think it was)... The way you described positions of furniture & people up until then makes the rest of that physically impossible!
I think I'm a decent writer, but not of this type, which is a main reason I don't submit to this site. That written, it amazes me how many submit multi-part stories (or a ton of singular tales) that prove them to write believable fiction of any kind!