All Comments on 'The Temp Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

Premise continues to be OK.

Story jumps ahead and into sex with a complete lack of preliminaries. Not even some conversation/dialog that would indicate they both felt the sexual tension.

Three stars.

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...

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