All Comments on 'The Term Paper Ch. 06'

by TattooGeno26

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kaidmankaidmanabout 8 years ago
good series

loved your series you did a great job the story moved me a lot please keep writing you have talent

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Fucking Good

TY

OlebillOlebillover 7 years ago
Bad

Was great right up to the point you got someone else involved. That's when I quit reading and went straight to the end only to fi d he married someone else. Sorry just not my idea of incest. If it starts with love between sibling it should stay that way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Shame on you "dude".

You had a great start with mother son but ruined the story by bring in the unrelated Charecters into the story. Mom and son were really cooking till that happened. Good luck with your next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well done

Some spelling errors but an amazing story to read. Loved it. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Excellent Human Beings

I loved the eroticism, of course. But I loved the ethics of the main character the most. The deep and real love written about the mother and son, and then the compassion and love for the unique person of Emily made this a top-level story.

Additionally, the writer did an excellent job of writing very fitting vocabulary and personality for Emily which was distinct from the vocabulary and personality of both the mother and the son. Very skillful writing.

Thanks, TattooGeno26. You produce literature.

OlebillOlebillabout 7 years ago
WHY

Why does it when mother and son finally get together and are just getting used to each other that every other person wants to get in on the action. Thought this was suppose to be about these two apparently not. Fuck up

HoltarenHoltarenover 6 years ago
Fabulous

I really love the humanly decent ending of the story, although a bit about extended bellies and milkfilled boobs I sorely miss.

Nutman99Nutman99about 5 years ago
amazing

What a totally awesome story. I loved it from the beginning to the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Wonderful

I really loved the story from beginning to end. Whether it is a true story or fiction it was truly a beautiful story filled with love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Oh just wonderful

May i just say how beautiful your storie was my dear. I loved every move every twist and turn please please write more

I just so enjoy your stories ......thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just...WOW

It was just beautiful and im sad to see the story end and the mom dying at the end is the saddest but it was still a good end, happy even, to a degree. Wouldve been cool if cherry and her father visited the mom tho.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved every minute of it. Great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can agree with Emily being brought in to the family so the son can marry and have kids,but the crap in France was unnecessary

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The wrapup covered the happy ending closure needed.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very well written but sad and happy as well. My guy's wife died of cancer too but we feel her presence smiling on us 🤗 😘

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

That was a brilliant story from start to finish, loved it.

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