All Comments on 'The Test'

Do you know the difference between your and you're???????

Yeah, I'm the grammar cop. Learn grammar before posting a story.

My fault! I know better, and I messed it up twice! Please don't put this on my permanent record...

I was sort of wanting to read that daddy fucked his daughter and sucked her boyfriend, now thats a nice thought.

Actually, that was a spelling error, not a grammatical error. Grammatical errors are things like leaving out commas, incorrect verb tense, or subject-verb agreements; such as using singular forms of verbs, when it should be plural, and vice-versa. Another thing, did one mistake ruin the story so much that you had to be an ass? I would understand, if it made the story unintelligible, such an attitude. But it doesn't change a persons understanding of the sentence. As a matter of fact, I've read novels and professional publications that had more errors in them than this story! So, chill out, Officer! Don't make a felony out of a misdemeanor!

By the way, great story, I loved it!