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Click here"A surprise, Master. Why don't you try one of the buttons? Maybe one with the waves on it?"
I eyed them suspiciously. I knew they wouldn't do anything dangerous, the rules I had set in place avoided that but I had no idea what they were. I took one of the gadgets in each hand and pressed the wave-symbol on the remote with the letter A on it. I heard a quiet buzz and a moan from Ashley. I raised one of my eyebrows and pressed the same symbol on the other remote. This caused the same sound but this time the moan came from Dolores.
"You have vibrators in your pussies and these are remote controls, right?"
"Yes, Master. I saw an ad on the net and after some research, we decided to give you these as presents, as tokens for the fact that you are the source of our happiness. Now you can punish us with intense pleasure. We thought that this would fit your style better than a new whip or another hogtie set."
I pressed both buttons simultaneously and held the buttons down for half a minute, causing my wives to start squirming and moaning.
"You two are totally and absolutely batshit crazy, you know that?"
"Crazy in love with you," Dolores chipped in after I released the buttons.
"You two are driving me insane," I replied grinning as I pressed down on the buttons again.
As I gave them a deep kiss each, releasing the button only for the kiss itself, I added, "But I still love you like I did ten years ago."
"I don't, Master. I love you more with every passing day."
THE END
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Congratulations on producing such a moving and imaginative story, your characters have substance and history which has given them all individual lives, in addition to the combined life as a duo, a trio and finally as a family of seven individuals. Your descriptions of a truly dominant partner worried about his partners is an enjoyable alternative to the traditional physically dominant male, to have a psychological male dominant is unusual.
Thank you for publishing this work here and I assure you that this will not be my last reading of this work.
Thankyou for this storey. I have no idea how many times I have read it, but I still keep coming back to it. That you have managed to create a Ds relationship without anyone being beaten, humiliated or abused was refreshing and lovely to read. The evolution of Nick, the thoughtful way he met their needs, and the way he kept to his own moral standards was really nice to read. I have looked for similar stories on this site but have found nothing like this one.
Original, well written, and a storey I will keep returning to. Please write more.
Second reading - all 6 chaps:
Clever & original opening - the text message - well written throughout. Delicious.
Dunno what's with Wargamer - he's entitled to his opinion, but he's wrong. The relationship is a throuple - three couple - relationship, where the relationship between the two girls is as important as either of theirs with him. The two girls marrying is, given current laws, the ideal solution - all three have equal rights with all children.
6 x 5 - yes, 30 - count em - stars
I really enjoyed the story and how it progressed in each chapter. The Ds was done very well and showed that even if he wasn't sure he worked at doing what was needed but doing it his way. I understand his choice to have the girls marry as that was for legal reasons witch helps when interacting in the nilla world. They where in essence all married to each other just not according to normal laws. A paper is only a symbol as are rings and collars of a choice and physical representation of there love and commitment.
I gave every chapter 5 stars and would have been higher if I could.
Again, I disagree with Wargamer. The relationship between Alicia and Dolores is not out of control; as I mentioned in my comment on chapter 5, a strong, loving relationship between the two of them is necessary for the stability of the threesome. (This is especially true now that they need to tone down the D/s aspects when the children are present.) And Nick is certainly a true dominant: both Alicia and Dolores dedicate themselves to him completely, not because he demands it, but because they want to do so. That is the difference between mere obedience and true submission: their devotion and obedience is the result of their trust in Nick and the love the three share. That isn't to say that they don't fear his punishments -- the man is diabolically clever in devising them -- but that fear isn't a motivating factor.
9th paragraph before the end... Ashley? That's the most confusing thing I saw in the whole 6 chapters. I know it was meant to be Alicia but maybe a last proofreading would have caught that. Great story, 5 stars!
A fabulous story from beginning to end. I loved the way the reluctant dom worked on making Alicia and then Delores happy and safe without being domineering.
5 throughout from me.
I still gave the last chapter 5/5 even I found the ending a little disappointing. He did not need the subs to marry each other and he allowed their lesbian relationship to get totally out of control.
A true Dom would have never let that happen.