All Comments on 'The Therapist Pt. 02'

Thank you, Shaima for this wonderful and descriptively erotic piece.

Your characters are as strong as ever, and it is a joy to see the uncertainty caused by the stories that the Therapist is having (?) to listen to....

With affection and thanks

Corinne x

Tantalising story, as usual! I tried to hold off starting to read part one and wait until all parts were posted, but I couldn't wait. I never did have any self control! Can't wait for part 3. Please don't make us wait too long!!

pretty good pt 2 I hope pt 3 will be coming soon

All I can add at this stage is that both chapters deserve a far higher rating than the site has given them so far. Let's hope things improve.

The narrative is so eloquent and beautifully rendrred that I forgot I was reading erotica. This story is simply stunning, a wonderful read. I can hardly wait for the next part, Shaima. With each new story you surpass your ptevious ones. You're do gifted. I really have nothing to offer as a criticism. It is quite exciting and the chsracters are so rich and developing beautifully.

I like this story. I'm intrigued. You are one talented writer Shaima32.

Very very good. Unusual and suspenseful in that it’s not really possible to guess where the story is going.

Still being mysterious.

And writing well.

A little confused by "dropping" into scenes being told by Valerie that turn into quotations without any delineation. Switching from Karen talking to Val right into to scenes containing Karen a bit of a jerk. But I figured it out on 2nd or 3rd reading. But it's tossing the reader about a little too much.