All Comments on 'The Third Apprentice'

You can draw way better than me, I need a ruler for my drawings. I can't draw people or animals

...gotta leave a comment on a long (multi-page) story like this; 5 stars.

Took me 2 days to finish this wonderful story. Thank you very much. Hot Stuff.

Well, this is a damn good story. Some good art too. Usually it's not the case, either it's a good artist but a bad writer or vice versa. I'll keep my eye out for you.

It seems several of your illustrations failed to show up (a pity, because you are a fantastic illustrator) but nevertheless, it was another excellent story. I hope we can get some more from you, either on this site or for purchase somewhere.

As others have suggested, I don't think I've seen any one person do as well.

I was hoping for somebody to get the best of the succubus,( perhaps by sealing her within a vaccuum, if few things can harm her ) but I guess that leaves room for another story.

Excellent dawing

I can't help but be a little disapointed Tubin goes unavenged.

This was incredibly good! Very creative descriptions, how Gwen eventually succumbed and started to enjoy it. Good illustrations too!

Overall, quite an inspiring text!

Good job.

I really enjoyed the illlustrations and the deeply descriptive fantasy. I loved the orcs! I'd never contemplated an orc cock, but now I have a new picture in my head I'll never forget.

very good and very hot story

Tubin's death was kind of eh. The other deaths were either of characters who we felt were bad people, or people who we didn't really care about at all. The story was very hot, but it would have been one of those fuzzy feeling stories if Gwen somehow brought back Tubin.

Perhaps in an alternate ending?

This was absolutely awesome! Really hope you d decide to continue this at sore point. I know you have quite a few stories your writing, but either way this one is a fave!

This story features a particular fetish: a man cums in a woman’s ass and keeps going. The man can ejaculate twice or even thrice without pulling out after the anal creampie or he can pull out and then immediately reinsert to continue the act.

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What a beginning - more please! So arousing!