All Comments on 'The Third Thursday'

Great story I hope you write more chapters

I hope this continues maybe how they get away with it and the mom so clueless nice fantasy

carol

all I can say is more please.

That is, fuck his Little Princess like there's no tomorrow and blow his heavy loaded daddy-balls up his baby girl's precious little cunt. A father's penis and his daughter's vagina--made for each other.

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His daughter was so damn tight the pleasure she was giving him bordered on pain.

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Dammit!! Where the fuck is this pussy?! It certainly isnt attached to any of the girls I ran across, lol!

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"Um," this was different and she liked it.

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Ok, ya really have to be a bit more creative than 'um', who the hell says that during sex anyway?? And what daddy smacks his girls ass instead of encouraging her? Especially first time around the block. That was kinda weird.

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Dan rammed his cock into her as hard as he could. It felt like her pussy was on fire and she was trying to scald him. "It feels so good Tiffy."

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Some of the conversation could use a little more feeling to match the mood/setting too, it sounds more like he's talking about the silk tie she bought him for christmas than his dick pounding in her tight pussy! Lol.

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She grabbed her clothes and went to the bathroom to get cleaned up. Tiffany couldn't wait until it was the next third Thursday and for her mom to be out. Her brain was already working on the different things she and her dad could do.

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She ditched fast, lol. Hell, surely mom leaves the house more often than once a month, I bet she could get creative, you know dad will, lol. "Well honey, maybe I dont mind paying for you to go to school here, free schooling far away isnt all its cracked up to be!" Hehe