All Comments on 'The Third Wheel'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the story. Please continue this or start something new with similar themes. Great writing.

KidG1000KidG1000almost 3 years ago

love it so much, don't listen to the haters. i hope this continues into a series, please continue with the footworship. alex is such a good little beta cuck boy for his superiors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

He sounds like another of life's failures. Maybe counselling could help?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Brilliant idea for a story and seriously we written, I loved every word of it! Really hope there’s a second chapter coming, I think it’s about time he started worshipping their ass!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Wow! Totally amazing story :)

12356416514a12356416514aalmost 3 years ago

Like this story a lot. Aaron and Kate are both very evil. Love the parts where Aaron dominates the cuck alone even when Kate is not around. And I love how Kate was kinda gentle at first, but got more dominant over time. Would love to read more or similar stories.

SissywithabeardSissywithabeardalmost 3 years ago

I liked it until like the ending part tbh.

slavejohn23slavejohn23over 2 years ago

I loved the story as well.

I think, you went perfectly around all the topics here. So if you really want to write a second chapter to this story, it would be better to make a spin-off ( for example the three of them went on holiday, meet some new people and one girl was first interested in Alex before knowing his secrets.. )

Good continuation!!

mistimksmistimksover 2 years ago

This story cries out for a part 2. Please.

Very good writing, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot. Needs a sequel where he is led all the way into submission to both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I can not believe I read this, how does it end?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

More please

Sub4D0MSub4D0Mover 1 year ago

FUX AWESOME!!! More please

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