All Comments on 'The Three of Us Plus Two Ch. 02'

A bit rushed but not to shabby.

Collage?

Thanks for the comment. No formal writing education, just old school.

The secret to winning a lesbian's heart, treat her like a woman would, what a novel idea! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.