All Comments on 'The Thunder Storm'

by JLovejoy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wonderful story

I really believe every word you wrote and that it was your own experience . It was a true love story . Well done .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
If...

If this story is between two consenting non-blood related adults, how can it be incest?

motherfucker74motherfucker74almost 15 years ago
Not bad

Step-father/step-daughter is a fine line. Technically not incest in my book, but fucking someone that helped raised you is hot and pretty close to incest just not quite.

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 15 years ago
Really enjoyed

your story, but it did leave me a little confused about it just being a (fantasy) figment of her imagination. It seemed so real. That must be a testament to your good writing. Thanks.

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