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After that, I expected to be preparing donations, but to my surprise, Ted sent me only a single text with an address and a short list of times when it would work to drop off his belongings. A couple days later, we made the delivery, and it was done. (Side note: we decided not to bother washing his sheets first.) That evening, however, once I hung up the phone, we put Ted out of our minds and I took Shay back to bed--this time, in our bedroom.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoUgh. Ridiculous in just about every way. And all of this supposed romance and the author thought "well used hole" was a good idea. Nope. 1*.
Jack5064 months agoYour grammar and spelling are good, so you must edit well. Your character development is lacking, as all of your characters are rather cliched and two dimensional, and your sex scenes tend to be formulaic and repetitive. Check out “The Novelist” and “Training” for some pretty well written sex scenes, and somewhat better character development.
Anonymous10 months agoNice premise.
Well told story.
But sex was much too automatic. Too fast starting and ending.
Needed more teasing.
Four stars.
Anonymous12 months agoagain, really good character development, a sound storyline, and hot meaningful sex!!
