All Comments on 'The Ties that Bind'

I can't say I liked the rape aspect of the story - but the story as a whole was well written and the male on male part was, shall we say, persuasive

Somewhere there should have been some lesson for cal. It just made me sick. even though well written

yuck

as beauty is often said to be in eye of the beholder (ear of listener, mind of reader) - the ties that bind here are the inability to rate. You so accomplish what you set out to do, and like durrmant so paint canvases in smelly-murky purple greys - that i hate a fairly well written story. Having read other efforts by this author, i trudged onward, even when the die seemed to have been cast -- forgive the cliche s - while non-consent might be appropriate - i found no erotica contained (Of course that is me and never do find much in sado-masochism pools (At best a toe in a small attempt to understand those so unfortunate as the Marquis.) The abuse is partially my own in this case.

Hate is not strong enough. Loath is close. The only person I feel sorry for is the wife. The other two characters should die horrible slow and very painful deaths. And writer is wrong Male on male sex forced or otherwise should put this story in the GAY section.

i thot this was a pretty good story. :D. i enjoyed it. and fuck anyone else who says otherwise. its a fucking literotica site, people need to chill and just enojoy the story. and i think its in its appropiate place too! keep up good work

While not a regular reader of Non-Consent I found this to be a powerful and well written piece. Cal forcing Stick to perform fellatio on him is an act of sadism, more than it is an act of homosexuality. In the content of the story, such an act of debasement must be demanded by Cal (to assert his dominance), and is required of Stick (to show subservience and acceptance of Cal's position) for him to return to the gang. To place it elsewhere would be ridiculous.

shit

your gayness shows thru your lack of respect for anything of value shithead.<P>

go away - get some help sick one

You must be sick,twisted individual.

Aren't some people threatened by a little man-on-man sex?

If you write a story that has gay sex in it, you should either label it as such or warn the reader in a preface that your story contains elements of gay sex. Personally I think these two belong in a special place in hell. I felt bad for the wife.

Erotic and arousing.

There should be a preface saying that there are elements of gay sex. And that's to protect you too seeing how most of us not in to gay sex will rate your stories lower than those who read the disclaimer and continue on to the story. I am not into gay sex so I rated your story very low. Consider a disclaimer in the future.