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Click here"Okay, Stick. That's enough for now. Get your clothes on; let's go."
He put his clothes on and headed for the door, never looking at Ali who was still on the bed, watching. Cal stopped him. "Don't you think you should kiss your wife g'bye?"
Stick turned back and walked to the bed. He leaned over and kissed Ali on the lips. There was no response.
As he turned to leave, she whispered, "G'bye, Tim." But Tim wasn't there.
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Note: I am aware that some readers on this site hold the opinion that any story that contains even the slightest element of male-on-male sex belongs in the section on gay sex. They're wrong.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 6 years agoThere should be a preface saying that there are elements of gay sex. And that's to protect you too seeing how most of us not in to gay sex will rate your stories lower than those who read the disclaimer and continue on to the story. I am not into gay sex so I rated your story very low. Consider a disclaimer in the future.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoIf you write a story that has gay sex in it, you should either label it as such or warn the reader in a preface that your story contains elements of gay sex. Personally I think these two belong in a special place in hell. I felt bad for the wife.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoyour gayness shows thru your lack of respect for anything of value shithead.<P>
go away - get some help sick one
miss_jsalmost 13 years agoWhile not a regular reader of Non-Consent I found this to be a powerful and well written piece. Cal forcing Stick to perform fellatio on him is an act of sadism, more than it is an act of homosexuality. In the content of the story, such an act of debasement must be demanded by Cal (to assert his dominance), and is required of Stick (to show subservience and acceptance of Cal's position) for him to return to the gang. To place it elsewhere would be ridiculous.
darkpriestessalmost 13 years agoi thot this was a pretty good story. :D. i enjoyed it. and fuck anyone else who says otherwise. its a fucking literotica site, people need to chill and just enojoy the story. and i think its in its appropiate place too! keep up good work
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoHate is not strong enough. Loath is close. The only person I feel sorry for is the wife. The other two characters should die horrible slow and very painful deaths. And writer is wrong Male on male sex forced or otherwise should put this story in the GAY section.
