All Comments on 'The Time at the Beach'

I'm a big sci-fi fan, this one touched a fascination I've always had. Thanks, O

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A beautiful story. 5 Stars doesn't do justice

Damn no mom daughter 3way

Strange, but well done. There's many strange things in our world. Perhaps when the daughter is 18, something similar could happen. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Great plot line, Great characters. It felt a little rushed, though. I think you had the story there for a bit kore fleshing out. Still, I enjoyed it a lot. 5*

Sad story

I loved it. I couldn't put it down

I loved the story. it did make me sad that Lorraine had "Moved on" I would have been a happier ending for me if she and Clara had ended up sharing Marcus. After all they both had claim to him.

What in the world would we do, without a writer like you?

So many dreams, longing and tears washed away by the hands of time captured in this one... you checked all the boxes.

Thank You. If only...

No anal -- Thank you!!!!

I got so into this one that I cried! Sooo creative & excellently written. Thank you! Loved it.

Interesting premise.

But almost all "story" and very little sex, at least sex that was described on detail.

Three stars