All Comments on 'The Time to Strike'

I'd give you more than five stars if it were possible. Great story, first times are always great.

Wow, this one was really, really good! You're very talented

Seriously loved this! More, please.

A much better story than many others. You did a great job starting, please add more to the adventure. I sensed real feelings, real people, especially in the description of Richard, no model perfect body, just reality, which added to the story.

Well written with a lot of emotion and with the trepidation one may feel getting into that situation. 5*

Lovely. Your characters and situations are so vivid and relatable. The parts about the pushing of "womanly buttons" and the deployment of feminine wiles made it feel like you were revealing trade secrets—very intriguing to a male reader. I just really like what you think needs to be said and what you think doesn't.