by CopyCat13
Thankfully a different twist to the normal 'stop time and fuck her' story line.
Shows promise. Please continue.
What the hell? You go out of your way to avoid describing any character in any way in your "Wardrobe Malfunction" series even though it actively harms the premise, but then here you're all about description? Does that mean you were deliberately gimping your Wardrobe Malfunction series, or did you just not know how to due narrative description back then?