by PleasureTorture
I like your stories but you should have credited the original author randymcmuffin who still has this story posted with the same title from 8 years ago.
Hello there.
I am indeed the original author, I used to write on here under the name 'randymcmuffin' however everything now is simply under the same PleasureTorture umbrella. Hope that clears things up.
I once read this on wattpad (i think?) and been searching desperately for it after it disappeared from my saved stories. So glad i found it again here on literotica. This is my secret fantasy; being driven to the edge and orgasm hard multiple times. Soooo hot! Definitely made me cum.
Good premise.
Sex is too rushed.
Needs to slow down. Needs more steps. Needs staff to ask her if she likes what's being done to her. Breasts? Nipples? Pussy? Clit? Maybe even her asshole.
Needs some gaps of non-teasing.
Four stars.
This is one of the greatest stories I have read in this genre. Truly captivating and well-written, and completely HOT. Please write more of this. I would love to see what happens when she wears the prototype out in public and perhaps has to deny herself?