All Comments on 'The Tour'

The second story by one of the most promising authors on Lit has been posted, and I love it.:)

Mia's adventures continue as she quickly brings passion to the page in the beautiful Pacific Northwest.

Make no mistake, Mia is a fiery young lady who knows what she wants and quickly gets what she wants:)

I look forward to watching this writer share and grow as an author.

Please join me in enjoying her work.

*****

Great pace. Loved reading it.

who are you and why are you in my house?

would you like to stay for dinner?

Great story! Loved the build up! Looking forward to seeing more of your writing.

Very hot. I like older men too.

Loved the attraction of the unknown stranger. Good buildup ... love women who take chances.

Reasonably plausible, atmospheric and very, very sexy. Love older man/younger woman stories. Well done.

Liked it even more the second time. I like brave little risk takers.

This story has many possibilities, but it should really be categorized as a Romance. It is also too short, and could use more character development. The love scene is well written but it is also much too short.