All Comments on 'The Toybox Ch. 02'

Fucking amazing.

i feel sick for enjoying this so much

Wow! Yes, Noah should be punished for killing that family but damn these grown men beating on the kid is ruthless (while being very realistic)! I kinda want to read more..does Mick take advantage of the teen, breaking his promise because he can't resist or more of what the prison mate is going to do to Noah..you took the story to another level when you mentioned how much of the outside life Noah would never get to have (unless he gets a crazy female pal to marry him and then he'd finally get to be with a female)..makes me want to be more mindful of my decisions..

Please keep going with this story!

I wish I could write with your imagery. I truly hope this story goes deep into Noah's first year of prison. Fantastic work, I love it. It as brutal as it is painfully sad. Looking forward to Noah's next "adventure".

Can't wait for more this is really good so far!!!