All Comments on 'The Toy's Lost Bet'

If anyone is interested in more, I accept commissions.

And I love the response I've recieved here! The only thing I can wish for more is comments :) They are what makes an author want to write.

Well written. Excellent description of the emotions and reactions which Viv experienced.

We'll pass upon the workplace sexual harassment.

You are despicable. I do not want any further to do with you. You ruin lives and that is shameful.

Quite racist. Try not fixating so much on 'dominating' an Asian woman.

Amazing raceplay story, you got a fan in me!

Great reluctance story, the race play angle doesn’t do anything for me at all it’s actually a turn off. Removing that aspect from the story leaves (for me) a scorching sexy story. Had I started reading this story first I expect I would have ditched it because the *raceplay* thing is unnecessary and horrible. However reading it in the context of the an alternate world where everyone is compelled to act on their kinks puts an entirely different light on it.

I’ll definitely have to be very careful to continue to read the Tags before committing to a story because there are an awful lot of kinks out there that make me want to hurl as well as those that just make me violently angry.

Tess (uk)

Awesome!!!

Get rid of the racist stuff, please.