All Comments on 'The Train Ride Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Haha that was awesome! I kinda guessed it mid-way through the story but it was still a lot of fun to read. Here's me praying someone would do it to me by accident. I'll definitely play it cool like that guy did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice twist at the end (pun fully intended). Your writing and imagination shows promise. More, please.

Ma8grets3weaknessesMa8grets3weaknessesabout 3 years ago

An excellent story with a surprise ending. Highly descriptive and well-written. It flowed smoothly. Well done. Please write more stories.

LSantiagoLSantiagoover 2 years ago

I have read all your stories and love your style, Im hoping to see a lot more if your work

thank you. I have been studying and working on my first story. I am ispired by your autlook I belive I have all that Need to start,

now all i need is an editor

take care

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I loved this story especially from a woman’s perspective. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

5 Stars, nicely done, quite predictable but really enjoyable at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Gave you a 5.0 = 100%.

Verity500 is a keeper.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I shall copy past a story i really like.

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Ma8grets3weaknesses - over 2 years ago

An excellent story with a surprise ending. Highly descriptive and well-written. It flowed smoothly. Well done.

Please write more stories.

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Verity500 is an excellent wife sex story teller.

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Not much to say really. I’m getting on a bit. I live in a small village in England, UK. It wasn’t until quite late in life that I started to try out new things. All thanks to my best friend. Almost by accident she opened my mind up to a whole new world of erotica. My life hasn...