by Verity500
Haha that was awesome! I kinda guessed it mid-way through the story but it was still a lot of fun to read. Here's me praying someone would do it to me by accident. I'll definitely play it cool like that guy did.
Nice twist at the end (pun fully intended). Your writing and imagination shows promise. More, please.
An excellent story with a surprise ending. Highly descriptive and well-written. It flowed smoothly. Well done. Please write more stories.
I have read all your stories and love your style, Im hoping to see a lot more if your work
thank you. I have been studying and working on my first story. I am ispired by your autlook I belive I have all that Need to start,
now all i need is an editor
take care
I loved this story especially from a woman’s perspective. Please write more!
5 Stars, nicely done, quite predictable but really enjoyable at the same time.
I shall copy past a story i really like.
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Ma8grets3weaknesses - over 2 years ago
An excellent story with a surprise ending. Highly descriptive and well-written. It flowed smoothly. Well done.
Please write more stories.
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Verity500 is an excellent wife sex story teller.