All Comments on 'The Training'

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ShiningStarrShiningStarrover 11 years ago
Excellent writing ....

Made me extremely wet as I read this. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Caring my ass.

Just another excuse for abusing her. I think she got tired of the game and left him permanently. He was an asshole. Bad story.

TornadoTysTornadoTysalmost 9 years ago
Is There A Sequel !

Not a bad start.

Dors the slave make it iutvthe door with dildo oants on, and are the pants a vaginal or anal version !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
TornadoTys

20 words three obvious mistakes!! Do you expect your comments to be respected when you don't think them important enough to exercise some quality control??? If this is your best work, seriously consider silence!!

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