All Comments on 'The Training of a Young Submissive Ch. 02'

Slow buy steady.

I like the details I asked for.

Please keep going.

Thank you.

Really enjoying the story unfold. What happens next?

I have but one small literary quibble. Your use of first person is fine, and works well in this story.

But when she goes to the bathroom to clean up, 'you' become an impersonal narrator, observing her.

I make to point because you write well. I hope friendly constructive advice will help you write even better. I gave it a five, as I did the first chapter.

I like it. Just the right touch . . . . .

Liking it so far but I didn't like when it went from the first person and then to Annie and then back.