All Comments on 'The Training of Michelle Ch. 01'

interesting and good flow to the writing. Hope it doesn't take long for the next chapter.

I enjoyed this and look forward very much to reading the next chapter. You have an easy style with a little offbeat humour behind what can so often be an overly-intense and humourless subject - well done - 4*s.

I posted the wrong version! Doh! The first paragragh should read,

"No sooner had we entered the restaurant when we were greeted by the sound of shattering glass. The Hispanic busboy had let a carafe slip out of his hand as he stared wide mouthed and red faced at me. I tried to avoid his eyes. "Damn it, Michelle" I thought to myself, "I did not expect the same wait staff from lunch to still be here for the evening shift". The maitre d' had not given a hint of recognition. But I could see some of the waiters stealing glances at me and smiling slyly. Of course my husband Tom took no notice, but my friend Kathy joked, "Michelle, that dress of yours is getting some attention, you tease." Are you going to spend the night leaning over, picking up your napkin so everyone gets a look down your cleavage? You always loved doing that to the boys in high school!"

Thanks for the positive responses

Love the start of the training...where to next...something public again??? Can't wait for part 2

gosh. I think i need the second part, like, SOON . Please?

Excellent start....please come back and continue the story!

BTW...you've given me some ideas for my own pet...I love the remote control vibrator in public idea, coupled with her eating one-handed while she masturbates.

Excellent!

great first chapter .... sadly it looks like michelle is going to be waiting a long time to get fcuked.

lmao.

xxxhugsxxx

Love it, but need next chapter!!

I can't wait for the next chapter. This is a really interesting story line and I can't wait to see what happens.